Thursday, September 29, 2011

pesan pesan langit

pesan pesan langit yang bakal runtuh
menyuruh
aku membenci diri

seolah pesalah
di kandang tertuduh
yang harus mati dibunuh,
setiapkalinya aku masih angkuh

mencari syurga di bawah selimut subuh.
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5 comments:

  1. Musezafar GBSeptember 30, 2011 at 10:40 AM

    performing subuh prayer inserted with recital of Al-Quran is a perfect combination ;)

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  2. Para JamaludinSeptember 30, 2011 at 11:36 PM

    meh aku tambah baris last.
    "oh!"

    sedap syuki.

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  3. ghost October 2, 2011 at 2:33 AM

    pasti surgamu akan kepanasan pada siangnya.

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  4. mosyuki borhanOctober 4, 2011 at 7:27 PM

    terima kasih Muze, Para, Ghost!

    "sama2 kita beringat"

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  5. AzhaOctober 19, 2011 at 8:57 PM

    Well written!

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